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All Deviations
All Deviations


Double, double
Toil and trouble,
Fire burn and cauldron bubble.

Cold is the night upon our backs,
Dangerous the creature,
That leaves no tracks.

Nightmares standing at the bedroom door,
Sneaking in and taking more
Crazed and maddening to the core.

It comes, it comes,
It perches near,
To scrutinize with eyes that sear.

It wants, it wants,
But can it have,
What it desire comes from beyond the black.

Demanding of us things to come,
Such is in motion,
Not yours to have.

Your throat!
It starts to bleed!

Your eyes!
They melt!

My skin!
It peels!

Hell most foul has thrown up,
This thing, this thing,
This creature turning fate about.

It casts no shadow,
Leaves no trace, drags like a knife
Through fates designs.

I hear it, I hear it,
The silence so deafening
Be gone, be gone, you horrid hell thing.

He hangs upturned from a dead trees branch,
Watching the witches locked in trance,
Its him they speak of, him they fear.

Lightning crack and all goes dark,
The night dead black,
Not one stars spark.

The moon retires,
Hides its face,
Afraid of horrors time could not erase.

The fire beneath the cauldron frozen,
As time stood still,
The crones’ faces locked in agony.

Lightning flash, he sits with them,
Watches them, whispers to them,
Senses their fear, their horror at his words.

Tell me crone, from whence he comes,
The rider, breaker of the storm,
Speak puppet, speak for the crone.

The first crone raised her head,
Eyes reforming in her skull,
He comes now, from the halted storm.

The second crone’s head rolled forward,
Does your power match his might?
Or are you merely afraid to fight?

The third crone’s skin slid back in place,
Horrid pain across her face,
A tree bears fruit, with destructive grace.

His eyes locked with ferocious design,
Lightning flash, his face in hers,
A hairs breadth apart.

His head tilting, smelling the scent,
Inhaling the tendrils of her souls contempt,
Speak false to me and you won’t live.

A wicked grin crossed her face,
Tension crackling,
From his rising rage.

Find the tree, burn it down,
Destroy the fruits of its hallowed ground,
Do all that, survive the storm.

Lighting crack and he was gone,
The crones remained, their fire dying,
Tormenting whispers, yet now alone.
Double, double,
Toil and trouble,
The fire burns,
The cauldron bubbles,
Dangers doubled,
Though not for us,
The nightmare for the nightmares thus,
The rider is coming,
The moons near full,
The wildfire,
He has come of age,
Now is his time to fight
Or die.
©2008 ~Jonas86
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I guess this is sort of a continuation of some of my other works. Part of it is the crones that appear in Shakespeare's Macbeth and what they are saying in turns, then you have the addition of another character, who I think rather explains himself, I don't think I completely captured his intent as I had wanted to, but then it is 2am! I haven't bothered to edit this (again) sorry to those who read my stuff more often than others, so if you spot something painful, I'm sorry, just let me know what and where and I will fix it soon :)
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=frizziekizzie:iconfrizziekizzie: Mar 31, 2008, 8:51:56 AM
That's very interesting and very brilliant. It made me feel as if I was there. Where did you get the inspiration from? Well done :)

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What others gain is what you lose.
What you gain is what others want.
Either way it is a lose lose situation.
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~BlackRose12007:iconBlackRose12007: Mar 31, 2008, 3:15:13 PM
wow this is amazing you have quite a muse :D

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Life is a gamble.
it's harsh and painful most of the time, and it's not for the timid.
spoils go to the victor, not for the one that doesn't even show up for the battle.
~Acheron Parthenopaeus~
~Kyoki-Loves-Gaara:iconKyoki-Loves-Gaara: Mar 31, 2008, 6:40:32 PM
GOSH DARN IT!!! YOU DID IT AGAIN!!!! YOU COMPLETELY PUT ME IN A STATE OF SILENCE AND AWE!!!! lolz. You're amazing!

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Da ebil zombays are comin to get yoouuuu!!!!! :sprint:
AAAAAAAAAAAH!!! :jawdrop: A monkey ate your uncle!!!! ...... Hehe...... @__@; YES! I'M WIERD OK?!?! DEAL WITH IT! :threaten:
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:sing: + :boogie: + :music: + :heart:= My very reason for living!
~Jonas86:iconJonas86: Apr 1, 2008, 2:42:14 AM
Cheers, I'm glad that you felt that way, I could feel it inside and I could see it in my head, but I found it really difficult to get it into text :)
~Jonas86:iconJonas86: Apr 1, 2008, 2:43:39 AM
Oh, by the way, inspiration, ummm, without wanting to sound odd or strange or anything, its all in my head, the scary places mostly :s
~Jonas86:iconJonas86: Apr 1, 2008, 2:46:01 AM Mood: Affection
THANKS :D it didn't feel as good as I had hoped it would, but then I guess the strange sort of style I use doesn't always allow me to do what I want with words. so thats a :( with a big :D
=frizziekizzie:iconfrizziekizzie: Apr 1, 2008, 2:54:27 AM
It is fantastic. You have a very creative soul :hug:

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What others gain is what you lose.
What you gain is what others want.
Either way it is a lose lose situation.
:rose:
=frizziekizzie:iconfrizziekizzie: Apr 1, 2008, 2:55:20 AM
I know what you mean - that is where most of my work comes from too. From the places that you don't want to experience again, or the people...

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What others gain is what you lose.
What you gain is what others want.
Either way it is a lose lose situation.
:rose: